The story arc to my video

My video is going to be one of love, jealousy, pain and passion between a boy and a girl.
I am starting my video with a few establishing shots to set the tone and then a close- up of my main singer (male) singing.

From here it shows the main singer on a hill looking all thoughtfull and staring into nothing and then cuts to a shot from behind him walking into a club (I am thinking Gordonstoun house on a Saturday night), there will then be a few shots of him partying and dancing and some shots of the club to change the mood again to a more up beat sort of feel.
A POV shot of the guy getting pulled out of the main dance hall by the second main character (female) to a slightly better lit place where there is a shot of them from down the corridor of the two of them together but doesn't show anything going on.
I then thing I will have a shot of him walking down the corridor by himself looking all smug with the girl still there in the background and then have it cut to an arc shot of the main guy singing then cut to a close-up of his face singing.
I am thinking that I want a montage of shots here in the music gap, having a calender stop motion to show the days passing and some fast motion to show the sun setting.
It then cuts back to the club a few days on to show the guy with a different girl for a few seconds, then another girl, and another and another which tells the viewer that the guy gets around.
Jump cut to the girl seeing him with a different girl and her running away.
The main guy runs towards the camera trying to catch her to say he's sorry but he can't find her (different shots of him looking around) and he walks out the door in shame and sorrow.
It cuts back to an arc shot of the guy singing and all upset from his mistake.
It then cuts to the hill that the guy was sitting on in beginning and the girl coming up behind him, she sits down with him and they look at each other and start talking, they start to smile and stand up, it cuts to a close-up of their hands coming together and then a shot of them walking off together.
In short, they fall in love, he cheats on her and she sees, he is sad and she finds him and forgives him and they fall back in love and walk off together.